Thursday, July 19, 2007

LEFT ALONE

LEFT ALONE
You know, how it feels
when people say you are gone,
and in the whole world you are left alone...
When you have have nobody to talk with,
when you have nobody to walk with.
when your thoughts are said to be bored,
when in all,only you are ignored
When your presence irritates all,
when you feel yourself very small.
when your life becomes a joke
,and your respect vanishes into smoke.
when your dignity,is burnt into ashes,
when whole attitude inside you,crashes.
Then comes the moment, you stop your breath.
you hate loving life,you start loving death....


-by Pulkit Popli

5 comments:

Unknown said...

hii pulkit..loved ur poem left alone...i am actuly surprizd dat how can u write such wordz at dis age....
i knw how it is to be left alone...whn u dnt hve ny1 to tok wth....
my dear keep writin...tc

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Well,very nicely written ! Wasn't expecting something like this from you.
One suggestion, don't start writing on these lines, its very addictive,won't be able to write on other topics, better write on brighter shades

Reeta Skeeter said...

whew! well written!

Hope said...

Hey, nicely written, but i wonder why at such an age you are writing on dark sides.
Life is beautiful, try some thing on brighter side also..
Well keep writing...would like to read more from you.

Unknown said...

kamaal hain !!!!!!